yay lineart! critiques always welcome!

lol elegant, really?

awww they look in love.. who are they?

they are no one, they have no names, they just are, lol

ooooh... then i name them Matt and Sarah

hahaha they look nothing like us, and sarah already is mad at me for not making it us

hahha

the irony is Im not really a big fan or bishounen stylings XD

But! i said it is

..*as per kims comment*

hahaha

ohhhwell

dude! there are mistakes all over this! you should know better! mostly the hands. i know you're WAY better than this.

so take the time to fix it and it could and will be awesome! and the girl's left shoulder/chest area

the fingers throught he hair are nicely done

but the girl's left wrist bone/joint is on the wrong end, should be on the other side

always the critic, GEEZ Kina such a buzzkill

lol

haha i RARELY critique people's work

usually that's brad hahaha.

lol, Ive been messing with the hands constantly, they're conquering my soul

girl's neck is really really long, guy's left hand is really effed up, girl's left arm is a bit too long.

i really *really* love their faces though especially since the last thing i saw were just the dot eyes with bushy eyebrows

bahaha Iwanted to keep those but I thought better of it and I know, his left hand is terrible, I was wondering who would call me on it hahah

my limbs always end up too long XD

you could totally just say it's a style thing, but this isn't DA

hehe yeah...it's pretty sloppy for your caliber, matt. i'll wait to rip on you til round 2.

hmm a good example is when clamp does a really girly show and all the guys look very lanky and femanine with long flowy hair and lady faces

lol =P Ill slop your face. ugh someone else fix it, Im too lazy

Kina told me you have to make it Squinoa. I concur.

hahaha much to late now XD, redoing the hands will be irksome enough lol

maybe one day Ill do some ff8 fanart

awwww

And I will add it to my 'private' collection

lol who said itd be dirty......not to say it wouldnt lol

you cant help but make Squinoa things dirty. Its just their nature.

Like mud.

lol, I always saw quistis as the dirty one

She is a semi-incestuous pedophile. That's as dirty as it gets.

EXACTLY, that shits hot

speaking of FF art.. Nancy.. i have a picture of Cloud i wanted to give you.. that someone else drew. Not sure if you will like the style..

but yeah.. where should i send it and any other fanart i see?

oooh uhhh.. I guess the best would be to email it to me

nancy_e_townsend@hotmail...

I love SEEING zee fan art in any form. So bring it on.

haha okie! i keep my eyes out for Squal and Cloud! Anyone else you like?

same

FFX stuff Tidus and Yuna I like as well

awwww figures.. i saw that too but didn't save

My couples are Cloud/Tifa (die Aerith!!), Squall/Rinoa, Tidus/Yuna.

anywho.. sent

porn especially *snicker*

lol aarent you the purist

my main man is Squall. Cloud is a close second. Zack too. Dark haired Cloud mmmm

squall+ quistis

porn? FF porn? WHERE?

AGREED!

lol, rikku wakka

+ rinoa.

i had one of Vincent and Yuffie.

... where is that

wrong one but sure!

XD

in that case, cloud and lulu!

Hey its very difficult to find hetero pairings out there for FF characters.

Rikku is cuuuuuute

ff7?

zing!

she's freaking illegal, but darn cute

My favorite is Kimahri/Yuna..*shudder*

lol

i have a whole bunch of FF porn somewhere actually

bahahaha furry!

Shes legal in the second game!

no wait...shes still not.

loooooooooooool this got dirty

hahaha

dude...seriously. Where?

getting you ready to fap

naw. Just like to giggle at it mainly.

how about Red XIII and Rikku XD

Truth be told, if its TOO graphic, I'm not interested

same with my fanfiction obsession.

ewwwww Matt

bahaha

*sees cloud fan art* Ohhh. A very nice style. I'm not that big a fan of the Dissidia designs though. They made they all look 14

*they made them

UUUUUGG i have seen Red and YRikku

I LOVE GLOW!

REALLY?!

priceless

yes Matt, and yeah its a different style! But that person did a lot of FF art... so i'll keep my eye out for more!

thanks! Its definitely well done.

okay NOW Im going to bed. 5 am camping.

okie.. Night Nancy! have fun!!

But seriously...you find something not gross in any of those pairings, hook me up

haha okie!

i know i have stuff

i just have to look through it

lol XD night nancy

yeah there is something a little awkward about the arms or something, but way better than i could ever do so Im not one to talk

however i love the faces a lot its very cute

I dont really believe in "mistakes" in art though. I mean, people draw things in ways that are interpretations of something

to me, art doesn't have a formula you can get wrong, but i suppose there are something things that make peices better

the only thing i would like to point out is that through my untrained eyes, the line on the back of his hand, kinda makes it look like his

palm, which it clearly isn't because no one can bend that way haha. I know it's supposed to be the knuckles, but it gives the appearance

of a palm, to me, anyway

that's like saying there's no such thing as bad art!

ehhhhh there are mistakes if you are aiming for a certain caliber, or a certain form of anatomy

you can't pass off mistakes as 'art' if your intention was to do something else.

so if your intention was good anatomy and you make mistakes, re-defining your intentions to be those mistakes is a copout!

it's not necessarily a calibre or quality of art, but if you're trying for figurative representation you need to draw properly

and there are obviously mistakes you can make

just like you can make mistakes in singing or acting or any other art form