progress with depth and proportion alterations thanks to kimmy. still very much the same pieces as the sketch though

make her yelling or something too!

get some expression on that face!

Im still trying to decide if I want her fighting under water

if she's underwater i don't know if a heel drop is a very effective move

but I agree shes pretty bland lol

since it very much depends on gravity

I know shes definitely falling downwards but I just cant decide on what shes falling through

you rarely ever see underwater fights though. I was thinking some kind of serpent

The position of the eye in relation to the body seems like it'd be a stressed/uncomfortable position - if someone wanted to look that way

they'd turn their head more or their body. or just look somewhere else.

regardless, ink details are beautiful so far!

update! with alterations

she'd be safer with some armor on her torso instead of her legs!

lol

more curved back! and more lines! more critiques (Im waiting for Kim to say more curve XD)

i'd like to see a little more curve in the hatch pattern of the fishnets

you can use it to really define the volume of the thigh and get convincing roundness

true enough, and an easy fix.

yeah curve the back so much that you think "no way, that's too much" and then curve it MORE

lol