this book is going through the re-edit phase or as i like to call my editor the butcher, but does this plot sound interesting/As the bond between Jenna and Jake strengthens over their shared fate, they become entangled in a web of danger and destiny. The curse that flows through their veins is not merely a burden but a beacon
beacon- a fire or light set up in a high or prominent position as a warning, signal, or celebration
I think that our burdens are often designed to be our beacons to lead us to discovery, our self purpose, to comfort others in the afflictions that we share.
it is very original i just had to edit it down to a log line, so the concept seems familar but i tend to do twists, it is a twist on werewolf lore. I just had to turn it into amysterious log line, But thanks very much for the input