aw. :c hope you aren't feeling too down. I've had fun with Reuben on the TDM. idk what revisions they wanted, but do what's best for you

Dorked: they wanted me to write a thing showing reubens response to something bc i didnt show enough morality in the samples.
maybe i will revise. Im not sure

Im feeling fucked up abt it

hmmm, I'd say give it some time?

I think you can pull it off!

if it helps at all, I had to do a similar revision request with guilmon

Yea but me having to do revision with Both my characters for the Exact Same Reason is whats fucking me up

aww ;;

IT'S OKAY. just remember that a revision request isn't saying that you suck

you got in with Technus. You can totally nail this!

Yeah im just. Aough

maybe give it a lil' bit to cool down? do something nice for yourself, etc

yeah!! and remember, we're all here to help :< not to mention, root you on. I completely believe in you!!

Okay, I'm going to try to revise

what do yall think of this

POINTS EXCITEDLY
BLIZNAK
-continues reading-

UsagiSquared: yeah, reuben says it at the end of the Babyfier episode, he seems to have picked it up from gantu

oh my god thats where the voltrons got it from....

Wait they say Blitznak in Voltron?

can't recall, but the fanfic community sure loves it

considering that at least one major person behind Lilo and Stitch went to work at Dreamworks eventually, I honestly wouldn't be surprised tho...

woag
thoughts on the revision thiugh? im. So nervous

hmmmm... I think it looks good to me, but definitely get one or two others to voice their thoughts first :0 Personally I think it's strong. Ye've got good points toward a sort of 'wake up call' for Reuben here

UsagiSquared: yippee! Yea definitely more opinions

Cause after all, things have never been that serious for him!!

I'd say the most I'd add if I wanted to like
make extra sure it got through, is just expanding on why he feels the way he feels at diff moments- but that's me being an overachiever/overstresser

In your shoes, I'd definitely be panicking the same way

Bumps this so you can get eyes on it!

ty usagi

Since no one else has said anything, I gonna send these to a few others for their opinions u3u Ye gotta send it soon after all...

Thank u usagi

I think the optional prompt covers it!

maybe why does he feel like a mess? the panic? guilt? a little more introspection since its a sample?

looks strong tho otherwise

usagisimaginaryfriend: i covered why he feels like a mess- he's never seen anything like this before

does that make people feel like a mess? or more lost?

both i think

Ok! They got back to me- they think it's okay!

it looks like all of us think it's fine so far- pyra and i both suggested extra, sure, but what's here should be fine!