感謝某A在我趕稿趕得亂七包糟的時候願意幫忙校稿，當我第一個讀者
雖然我印出來還是有漏字，第二次印漏字改掉的但有其他問題，覺得自己是手殘兼眼殘

沒有寫長文的經驗，但也是摸出了近一萬字，怎麼會這樣

如果有任何心得，歡迎留言給我，可以去AO3比較不赤裸

有點想把這篇翻成英文，然後用一點美式的背景
但其實只是想聽里維講Fuck off, Smith，不過文裡甚至沒出現這句(???

The room is unfurnished, completely empty. That’s no problem for Levi, though. It’ll be easier to clean before he settles in.

He plans to pick up a bed frame from Facebook Marketplace in the next few days. For now, he brought an air mattress for the first few nights. This afternoon’s plan also included buying a floor lamp at the nearby Target, since the room doesn’t have a ceiling light. He needs one before night falls.

Well, fuck the plan. Fuck the lamp. Erwin ruined all of it.

中間略，請見 ChatGPT潤稿的英文腦洞
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“Fuck off, Smith.” Goosebumps pricked Levi’s arms.

In the end, he stayed in Erwin’s room the first three nights.

Too risky, Levi thought. What he didn’t realize was that this was only the start. He’d be walking into Erwin’s traps again and again.

能將巨人的世界用網遊視角帶入真的很厲害.另外要恭喜團兵有情人終成眷屬.

看summary腦子裡浮現某個古風網遊是正常的嗎

forthewords: 想要有原作成分，又想要他們快樂在一起，就變這樣了
mob_eruri: 是 完全是

副本團長轉陣營指揮也挺原作的，本來以為只是攻略牆外世界這個大副本結果直接升級成跟牆外人類的陣營戰，大好會想沒換到是我的遺憾

mob_eruri: 我其實有看到大的無料噗，但那時候已經錯過印調了，怕不夠所以場上沒膽去換 之後場次有機會的話，我再寫點別的東西去換！
創哥會想，我借原作用

下次一定

mob_eruri: