Trying to crush his AU into 400 words

Hot turtle

Hot turtle loses brothers

TO SPACE

Hot turtle becomes hot bounty hunter

Still no find brothers

The end

Thank you, Khronk.

Oh geez... justify why he's a Myth

UHHH

Othello says 'life sucks balls. So shoot people if they need shooting so you can win the game.'

Ohgod okay I can poke this more tomorrow

I need sleep

I'M HELPING

YOU ARE AN ASS BUTT

I love how they're asking what my plans for him are and I'm just like "... I just wanna see how being stuck without his tech breaks him."

I mean that works?

I can link you mine if you want an example?

Sure! I'm working on the personality part of it right now lol

Sorry Plurk is being a fucker and not updating

I'll get it one sec

Captcha Check

Here you go

Oh and when I apped they DID ask for revisions so I gave it to them

I can't remember if I added that to the app... lemme see if I did

I think apps are screened though

Ah yeah they are; here I'll plurk paste it

Role Reasoning addition: (Plurk Paste)

So you got an idea

Thankee!

I'll have to get his Permissions set up properly, too, so I can link them.

Folk has their own; that's what I use for my Raph and it's been fine for every game I've been in

Oh, do they? Shit... I better find that

Lemme snag it for you

Captcha Check

Here you go

The games I'm in all seem to have their own but I used the FM one for Route too and it was no issue

People just want a basic permissions thing to link to

OKAY I'VE GOT IT DONE

https://von-ryan.dreamwi...

Indilee Can you tell me if that looks okay?

Sure lemme look it over

Looks good to me! If they have any questions or want revisions they'll ask you

I know I tried to stick to their word count limits and then they wanted more info so I gave them even more

But yeah go for it

So I just drop the whole thing in a comment there? Or do I link?

Oh looks like it's the whole thing

OKAY WELL

HERE I GO lol

Yeah just copypasta it in there

AND IT'S DONE

Also plurk kindly tell me when I get messages

WOOO

Now you get to wait

IS IT DOING THAT TO YOU TOO?

IT'S SO ANNOYING

YEAH It's not updating and showing me if people said stuff 8C

SADGE

YEAH 8C I keep having to hard refresh the browser

It's like plurk please

BOO

It's still doing it

But OOF I got Othello's done

I still gotta do Mikey's but for now

I TAKE A BREAK

Mikeys will be easier because you don't have to justify why you picked anything, etc.

But yeah take a break!

I gotta work on Decadia app and get naughty permissions up but trying to make shit for con and figure out what game to play tonight for stream

Or just skip stream and work on more crochet

Yeah, but at least Decadia app will be way out still

I made a strawberry whale

Gonna make him a little keychain I think

CUTE

It's amazing how changing down a hook size makes my hands ache but YEAH

Think I could get 15 for it? The findings I prefer for these are more expensive so to recoup cost I gotta bump it up

I think so, yeah!

Sweet

Oh dang... they want revisions and they're ones I wasn't expecting to have to think about... Yikes.

They're hella serious about their application process... This is Old School LJ vibes.

Yeah they apparently vet really hard? I guess???

I know I was surprised when I got revisions but it wasn't an issue, I just answered the questions and expanded on it

But you used to do old school so it shouldn't be an issue

I am but also... I didn't exactly miss it

HAHAHAHA

\casually word vomits for revisions\

Perfection

I haven't even finished the Content Warnings revisions they want yet and I'm already at like... uhhh....

700 words

... wait, it says 'summary/bullet points'

... motherfucker how the hell am I supposed to do that?

I didn't limit myself when I answered them, I'd just give them your reasonings

Did you get content warning revisions too, then

?

I did not

Lemme look at the original app again

Oh okay I think I know why they're asking for it

They might want more 'bullet point' things like you'd see on say, a content warning label. Like here's what I had for mine:

Content warnings related to the character: This boy is super afraid of bugs so that might crop up from time to time. Death of family members. References to body horror. Kidnapping/Being kidnapped. Forced transformations. Feelings of guilt and loneliness.

It's more of a list than the justification that you gave? You could give them both in terms of more bullet pointy things

Like here: Torture, murder, gladiator battles, assault and abuse of more than one kind

I would list the abuse

Like physical/mental abuse

Maybe quantify that more, if that makes sense?

Like for example I would say for Othello: Physical torture, mental duress, fighting, both physical and mental assault, familial regret, depression, loneliness and guilt. Prone to anger and dismissal of others.

Things like that?

Maybe?

I've written up a whole big long thing about instances of it in his history LOL

Have a Word Dump

Probably too much, eh?

I would give them more than less so I think that should be fine? I don't actually know the mods well at all so I gave them little paragraphs like that in my revisions

Okee. We'll see how it goes.

They want me to answer another question, too

Yeah I'd just answer them and they'll probably be happy with it and letcha in

HOLY SHIT HE GOT ACCEPTED

Now he can ruin everybody's life

AW HELL YEAH

I'll go through and do all his acceptance stuff after

I figured he would since you're thorough with your explanations

I CAN WORD ABOUT OTHELLO FOR A LONG TIME

WELL YEAH HE'S FUN