end of third paragraph: Chemistry is easier DURING the summer.

and the story itself .. haha

"He sweeps aside.." That sentence could start with him sitting down, i.e. While sitting on top [...], he brushes

brushes [...]*

What do you mean by "technically discouraged but done anyway"?

same paragraph: as he swayS* (tense)

Sweat has been forming on his brow and his little handkerchief he has not been up to the task. << wait, i don't get it. maybe rephrase?

yesyes! i will comment too! so far so good

"How was your date with Molecular Bonding last night?" (no comma between "bonding" and "last")

"... you'll grow into it," Aida's voice ..

<< should be a period at the end of the sentence. And I think same paragraph dapat.

I LIKE YOUR ENDING! HAHAHA ANG NERDY PERO SWAK

that's how every experiment will be ending hahaha ..

tommorow .. i'm counting on you .. haha

yessir!

THANKS MI

KLI

it I agree with meekulee's comments, un din ung mga napansin ko hehe. But overall it's good Heeheeee. Gusto kita tuksuhin!

i haven't done some of the changes you suggested .. the grammatical one's yes ....

www.plurk.com/karlababes : u hav a break at 10-11 ?

haha .. i am so glad people are helping