Having not heard the previous edits, I can only say that the bass and organ give a very powerful presence to the material.

I like the way the piece ends as well. Is it to be used to back lyrics?

I would like it to have lyrics, but I can`t sing or write lyrics, so i will have to find someone to do that

thats also the first time I tried playing a keyboard.

Seeing as I normally do country, I don't think anything I'd write would fit with that.

haha probably not