Awesome!

the flow of your writing: para kang nagmamadali. Kakasimula pa lang and I get the impression that you jus want to get it over with.

ralegan: oh hmmm that is a problem i guess i just didn't want to make it super long i'll make some edits probably

constructive criticism lang sa writing... I think the structure could be improved...

i.e. kung tumingin ka other reviews, you can think "what does he have to say about gameplay?" and you can scroll around and you can

instinctively find it...

I think kelangan lang i-bold yung titles ng subsections?

Ralegan has a point; cutting it down into smaller bits (2 paragraphs per section at the most, then using subsections)

would really make it easier to digest. Nonetheless, great start for a first article!

AHAHAH 1 PART THERE MADE ME LOL.

i see ok im going to revise it then

PKaw HAHA special mention ka

editted

mind reading it again? D:

parang gusto ko na rin gumawa ng review. pero tinatamad ako lol

bumaba din ung score :|

"The images don’t feel as crisp and it only runs at 720p." <-meron bang lmalampas talaga rito? Lahat naman inuupscale lang diba?

ffxiii? killzone? i'm just saying its not the best

nope... not FFXIII or Killzone, apparently

ay... anjan pala Killzone

err... pero sabi, 720 lang daw

I think di mo pwede lagyan "only" yung 720p. Majority of games run on it. Exceptional yung 1080p.

1080p ang ffxiii well sa ps3

hmm well thats true

hmm anything else?

hm... PS3 list yan... pero baka nga dahil bago yung FFXIII tapos hindi sya updated

hmm i can

i can't explain it properly

ay... yung screenshots ba, sayo? Baka mamaya, may IGN or Kotaku watermark yan.

google lol may url naman eh so hindi sha uploaded

ano pa pwede ko improve or what is it lacking?

haha dinagdag ko sa description "Vanquish is like an orgasm, short but sweet."

hahahaha... nice one

I think the reason why people find it "rushing", is because you dont add commas to your sentences. Commas slow the pace down, "cooks" ideas.

separates certain points in a sentence, so your brain can take breath during a sentence.

oh yeah i fail in proper punctuation

I think Lence88 has a point... Nag search ako ng "," sa article... parang ang kaunti nila para sa length nung sinulat mo.

Hey its all good. Parang.. Zero Punctuation ka XD

You make me want to review CoD: Black Ops. But I can't. Because I haven't played the multiplayer, nor can I. Peke game + Shit net.

lol D: im horrible at punctuations

my next one will probably be a rant on ff13 and why it's not FF

mahirap naman kasi idefine ano ang FF

ralegan: yeah which is why i will try to define

ff13 versus looked cool though. o_O dahil ba sa lack of GF's? o_o

(wait, meron ba o wala sa 13?)

meron

kevinikhe: meron... the motorcycles.