here it is-- I will gladly add more poems, prose poems, short essays, etc, as they are finished (hint hint)

I'll send you my original poem that has that line in it if you want?

these poems are truly beautiful. I tip my cap to Juguru, Kiwi, and LD!

of COURSE I want it!

if that's how the format of the poem came out when you opened it. It's supposed to be 5 couplets. I can resend it in a PDF if that helps.

my goal was to take Chuck9's words and thread them throughout the poem, btw.

it won't upload a pdf or keep the formatting pure because of the width. I've played with it a lot and can't seem to change the width of the

text area. Sorry!

adds if you change it, I can repost it.

ok-- I managed to fix everything but the first two lines-- I can't get the extra space out. So aggravating!

ok- I went AROUND it! All fixed now!

thanks you profusely:

everything looks great! Is that Chels's poem last?

no. That's mine.

you oughter label it. I LOVE it, but I wasn't sure whom it belonged to.

I love how you write Kiwi, it's what I call layered and circled, sort of how I do it, I'd love to read more

thank you, Girl. This is a link to some of my stuff that's a little older. www.thedrunkenboat.com/p...

you have to scroll down to get to my work.

Kiwi that's interesting, because that's how my Rumi project kind of turned out.

LD I'll send it to you now.