shazam!

what a line, "she knelt,/kneecap kissing the ground"

and "but love wraps itself in the prickly coat of grief and waits" Gah, what amazing lessons we can learn from love.

I meant "Aah."

Guru, that was a killer line break. "more time" definitely needed its own line!

lazyD is it okay if I put a link to your website on my facebook page?

of course. And all of you should read the fourth post from Dani Sullivan. I cried.

wow.

wow indeed.

Yes, it was "damn" good, and sad.

lazyD: thanks!

there's a new one being posted tonight, from Vicki Holmsten. Damn I love talented people!