I saved it to my computer so now I'll never lose it...

Considering publishing it to tumblr >

GLAD YOU LIKED IT

sweetheart i LOVED it

cuddles

-snuggles-

having another blah writing day

managed almost 3000 words, but it's so craaaap

-whines-

i'm trying to make them have conversations about stuff, but i can't find the words and i feel like it's so dull and silly and blah

patpatpat there there

thanks love

i'm sure it's less crap that i think it is

or at least that i'll be able to fix it

but some days just feel like pulling teeth :

*

YAY FIXING

also i hope you're aware that if i decide to put any smut in (still undecided, if i do it won't be anything too explicit) i'm making you

help me

bleh, i probably shouldn't skip ahead to them going into the forest - that's like a month of stuff that could happen

but whenever i try to give them some 'getting to know each other' time i just feel like the readers will be bored and i don't know how to

say what i want to say...

YAY HELPING SMUT

JUST MAKE THEM ALL JOKE AROUND FOR A BIT

EVEN LIADAN BECAUSE SHE'S ALL SO SERIOUS

CRAP I STILL HAVEN'T READ THAT THINGY YOU SENT ME

loooool that's okay

why don't i send you all the bits in a thing? with Telyn

they're actually the only bits i'm kind of keen about

GJFDJGLDF WAIT LET ME READ THAT ONE PART YOU SENT ME BECAUSE I'LL GET CONFUSEDD

no no it's okay, here

i'll organise them for you by date :3 including the bit

JFKD THANKYOU

sorry, yelling at my dog, hold on

HAVE FUN

26th day of Yula 12423 / 10th of Bolfihr...

there :3

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

“So, you're the Moren girl

I SHIP IT ALREADH

LOL

<3

THEY'RE BOTH SO GAY FOR EACH OTHER

Ljubica

HOW DO YOU PRNOINE THAT

OMG SO SHIPPABLE

WHO'S THIS MAN I THINK HE'S SEXY

MELCHIOR SWOON

i just read it all again, and i want to add more details to the latter third to show more of Elysia, but AFSDFJDSFDF i shouldn't like my

own writing so much

it's a Croatian name, so it you pronounce it Lyoo-bi-tsa

j is a y

and the c is 'ts'

you kind of... roll the l and y together

(i'm putting the pronunciation in the glossary at the back~)

SEXUAL TENSION

OMG HELP

i know~

i wasn't expecting it at ALL

then it happened and now i'm like FUCK this is BRILLIANT

OMG A GKY

KEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

HELP

www.behindthename.com/na...

OMG WHAT IS THIS WOMAN TRYING TO PULL

JGOIRJFGLKDJFG

i'm going to add more of Telyn going through Elysia in the bit you're about to read, maybe, at least i think it'd be cool...

actualyl

OH

yes, okay, this is gonna be perfect

i'm going to move the flood scene in Misr so it's later, like a week or two before they're at the forest

SOBBING BECAUSE BB TELYN IS ESCAPING BUT THEN SHE'LL BE CAPUTRED OMG*

then while they're slogging through boring ol Misr i'll cut over to Telyn in Elysia maybe

but then will people wonder what happened during those weeks with Sira and co in Misr?

... i should be asking this after you're done reading

DAIM'S BROTHER?????

THEY'D WONDER... OF COURSE

BUT IF IT'S BORING THEN YOU KNOW YOU CAN JUST LIKE MENTION IT IN PASSING

yeah, i mean, i honestly can't think of what else happens to them in Misr

i probably need to sit and think of something, maybe they'd meet someone... but nothing's coming to midn

OMG CAPUTRED HKGIOFDSHGVDFL

so i might just do a bit of a 'they'd spent weeks travelling across the empty plains'

DID YOU LIKE IT?

I MIGHT TWEAK IT A BIT MORE, BUT THE LAST BIT IS JUST ASDASDKSJDF

and yes, Daim's brother, i'm starting to throw in hints, so the reader knows but not Sira yet

LJUBICA YOU HORRID BITCH

i love her~ so much~

BETCHHHHHHH

i may not have a lot of women in my cast compared to the men but i think the three i have a really fucking badass

if anything, all of them could probably kick more ass than the guys

did you like the bit with the wings? i was so pleased~

is it okay giving breadcrumbs? i don't know, i like just slipping things in casually, but i don't know if it's not enough cause i already

know all the things and have them in my head

i feel like i might need to go back and give a proper sort of... this is what they look like, you know, describe more stuff

rather than slip in lines about their eyes or whatever :/

oh and because i like irony, Ljubica means love

i'm going to change the dates of things i've written~ -skips off happily-

LOL IT SHOULD MEAN SOMETHING ELSE

OMGYES THE WINGS WERE LOVELY

I WAS LIKE OMG SHE HAS WINGS SHET

hahaha, i didn't chose what it means~

YAAAAAY that's what i was going for

its ridiculous, in my head i picture it and then have trouble explaining it

i see it more like a movie than a book, in my head

and think of it that way, like 'OH, this'll be the bit in the cinema where they're like WHAT THE WINGS' cause they've been hidden the whole

time

IT'S SO BADASS

and in case you forgot since yesterday, in my headcanon Ljubica = Lara Pulver

well, unless someone better comes along :

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OMG THE WOMAN

YES OMG

I MEAN I WAS THINKING EVA GREEN BUT OMG

ooooh Eva Green could work

definitely along those lines