Again, comments, critiques, feedback appreciated

So much colour. I just died

the shoulders are too broad.

body too thin

yeah I figured about the colour. And well I still have problms with prop so that was no surprise. Initially this was meant to just be

one of my cover scribbles

Ah I see... and how are the art materials coming along?

i haven't dared touch them yet

w-why?

well because I'm lacking proper inspiration to paint...that and ...I dun wanna waste 'em on crappy attempts

awwwww....

I want it to come out good...it'd be such a waste if I made stuff like the last time...wih the prang paints...

dammit I hate typing with a tablet