well not that I did much of anything in the lineart department

Wow... love the colour gradients of the hand

I think your lines should show variations. like some are thicker than others.

that's exactly what I did

or is it not obvious?

...

what, it's true, I made the lineart for the parts which are nearer thicker and those farther away thinner..though I do wonder if I ought

to have done the opposite instead

What I mean, is like shadowing, some what. to give certain areas depth, and a sense that it is deeper and darker

I'm pretty sure it's possible to do with SAI, but then this is like...my second attempt at using it and I haven't looked up any tuts on it

yet (but I will~ )

I was still enjoying the lovely linework layer, which I hereby call "Discovery #2"...I can always stop self-teaching myself these things

if the attempts/process of experimentation is irritating, I guess

I see. Well its a nice attempt. You are improving.

I question the glasses though

hmmm?

yes, what about them~

I worked without a coloured reference so anything to do with the colours was "winging it"

no, it was shaky

shaky how

I dunno, I like it perfectly round

I see

hehe

though his glasses are a bit...oblong though?

yeah... that's what I mean...

perfect edges...

I see

I wasn't confident about using the curve line tool yet

but will definitely give that a try next

alright