let me just read through it once more 
        
        You still around BB? Want to read my short story?
    
     
        i'll just leave it here for when you get back 
       
        it's going in to my writer's class for the anonymous/mystery pile, where we're supposed to experiment with a different voice or tone
    
     
        so by all means, tell me if anything is confusing/stupid/weird, how you felt, what you think it needs - or doesn't need - be vicious
    
     
        but also excited, cause it features an old friend 
       
   
        BITCH READER MODE - ENGAGE.
    
      
        But unfortunately that only seemed to make it angry.  (I think you mean angrier because the shouting made it angry first)
    
     
        OH NOES WHAT ABOUT HOLLY???? D:
    
          
   
        also Jay is in honour of you :3
    
     
        It was very jgioerjgfjgd worthy like omg when the spiderwasp thing was coming and Jay still wasn't out I was like BITCH
    
        
        okay, if you liked it, then i'm safe to bring it to class, haha
    
     
        did it sound like my 'writing voice'? i mean... you knew it was from me...
    
     
        and only like three of them have read my stuff, so of course they won't figure it out... but still, i was trying for a different tone
    
     
        and i've like NEVER used first person
    
     
        It sounded more like me instead of you
    
      
        Honest I was like Holy crap she's writing me
    
     
        hahahahaha, well that part was unintentional, i was just trying to write as Holly
    
     
        Holly being sort of... conversation-ally and a bit of a smart ass
    
     
        i'm ridiculous, i worry about this, then bam, get it done in a day, and my brain goes 'QUICK, WORRY ABOUT SOMETHING ELSE' and i'm already
    
      
        thinking about NEXT week's mystery piece
    
       
        instead of going, oh, that was actually easy, and fun and my BB Holly
    
     
        now i have all sorts of new ideas, about her being picked up last minute, and exploring an alien sector far from Earth
    
     
        with Durrani and the Twins and Fal and Viera and all of them :3
    
      
        filing that away for my next novel/re-write 
        
        remember when I shipped Holly/Durrani lolz
    
     
        loool you ship ALL the things
    
        
        i don't ship many people with the Doctor though
    
     
        2/Jamie, 10/Jack, maaaaybe 3/Master
    
      
        actually I could see 5/Turlough, i should see if there's fic on that....
    
     
        yeah well duh, but that's not Amy/Doctor or Rory/Doctor
    
        
        DAD AND I FINISHED ALL 26 SEASONS OF OLD DOCTOR WHO
    
     
        OKAY FINE I ONLY WATCHED ABOUT 2/3 OF WHAT DAD DID
    
     
        ALSO THE GODAWFUL TV MOVIE FROM 1996, WE WATCHED TODAY
    
     
        the Doctor was AWESOME, especially when Dad and I went 'hang on, is that Mark North from Luther?' and it WAS
    
     
        and his companions were cool
    
     
        but the story was rubbish and the Master had strange snake powers and it was stupid
    
     
        i feel so proud though, i've now seen every single doctor and all the companions
    
     
        YAY 
       
        if you ever want any recommendations, just let me know
    
     
        also i have no other online friends to recommend it to, but download Luther
    
     
        it's a BBC series, not many eps, and its fucking amazing
    
     
        ... wait have i told you about it before? i think i might have...
    
     
        you might've mentioned it once or twice
    
     
        but I am SWAMPED with TV shows at the moment
    
      
        we have a couple of terrabytes worth of tv shows joey
    
     
        our tv shows folder is INSANE
    
     
        our current WIP shows are, let's see, rewatching NCIS (season 3 atm), Fringe, Warehouse 13, Inspector Morse, now rewatching new Dr Who
    
     
        original Mission Impossible, original Twilight Zone, the Man from UNCLE
    
     
        we started watching Ironside on DVD, haven't watched Get Smart since we moved
    
     
        my siblings watch things like New Girl and Community and have seen all of Misfits, which i'm way behind on
    
     
        and that's not even the stuff we have downloaded but haven't started
    
      
        see 
         
        and that's not including things like Glee or Alphas that aren't airing atm
    
     
        shit, that reminds me, the Glee Project's been airing for like 3 weeks now and i haven't even downloaded it
    
      
        i got like, half a dozen cartoon series - my sister already finished all 4 seasons of the men in black cartoon
    
     
        well i watched last season
    
      
        and it's trashy reality tv, but it meant that i knew who was coming on glee
    
     
        and therefore was excited
    
     
        when they did show up 
       
        besides, you can't talk, you watch all those awful model shows 
       
        ................EXCUSE ME
    
      
        YOU CAN'T JUST SAY THAT ABOUT AMERICA'S NEXT TOP MODEL
    
     
        THEY ARE PERFECTLY NICE AND REASONALBLE SHOWS
    
      
        they're total rubbish and you know it
    
      
        at least the only awful reality show i watch is related to Glee
    
      
        IT IS A SOURCE OF INSPIRATION FOR MANY GIRLS AND GAYS OUT THERE
    
     
        IT KEEPS ME CREATIVE AND SHUT
    
       
        sweetheart, you're allowed to like it 
       
        i downloaded rubbish cartoons from my childhood for funsies
    
     
        awful tv can be fantastic
    
     
        hence the reason we're downloading the original Batman with TV's Adam West
    
     
        where the episode titles come in RHYMING PAIRS
    
     
        awful rhyming pairs 
       
        but i refuse to be convinced that watching ridiculously skinny women have their 'hopes and dreams' crushed is anything but a guilty pleasure
    
     
        especially when the only two models i know in real life (okay, i technically haven't met one, but i will be soon) are both vegans who are
    
     
        obsessed with eating healthy and staying fit and about as far from typical models as you can get
    
     
        i watch it for the photoshoots okay
    
      
        like seriously if I had my way I'll just put it all in a huge compliation of photoshoots
    
     
        Except for Cycle 11 (which started the whole watch everything thing)
    
     
        Where I started stanning one of the Models named Marjorie because she was so cute and French and omg jfieurhjgkfd
    
       
        i remember watching a season or two of Survivor many years a go
    
      
        also the Bachelor at one point... or something like that
    
     
        but i haven't watched reality tv in ages
    
     
        too many old shows to catch up on, haha
    
      
        i'm actually loading an ANTM episode right now...