Terry002
13 years ago
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Terry002
13 years ago
It says I have too many verbs, like 'is' and 'was' and 'be.'
Terry002
13 years ago
I am not going to come up with new clever ways to say 'is', 'was' and 'be' with everysentence. It's just confusing.
Terry002
13 years ago
Then again, I'm not a writer
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Terry002
13 years ago
You must not repeat a lot of words. I think that's what it is looking for
mine needs toning
I have flabby levels of 'there', 'that'.
Terry002
13 years ago
I have heart attack verbs
your heart attack verbs have never phased me!
at kharamagic
13 years ago
Mine needs toning, but it's more toward fitness than flabbiness
at kharamagic
13 years ago
(I used academic writing from last semester, not fiction)
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