I had the character thinking of the monster as "idiotic" but decided I didn't want to use that word. I checked the word processor's thesaurus function to find better words to describe the stupid demon.

the synonyms it's offering me for "idiotic" include "demonic" "demoniacal" and "possessed". I'm not sure if that's really accurate or really inaccurate.

sniggers

How prone to stating the obvious is your character?

It's Jack. Jack is really peeved that there is a demon in Carly's bedroom where it obviously should not be. Going there was a bad idea.

Demons should probably stay far away from Jack

It does not end well for them, historically

Is it bad that one of my first thoughts was "wait, what are you doing in Carly's bedroom, Jack"

Trying to get Carly away from the demon, clearly. But this is for City People, where they're still living in Yuji's house, so all he ever needs to do to get in her room is walk across the hall and knock