things I'm especially concerned about:

-whether or not my tagging speed hinders anyone

-whether or not Dean's ic presence during this plot seems too demanding / is too pushy

-whether or not Bellamy Blake seems wholly in character & his voice sounds right

-whether or not Neal Cassidy seems boring or off

so any advice / crit / whatever is wholly welcome

did you

take the fuckign time

to shop an x on an image of eggnog

and then upload it

in preparation for a moment like this

are you

fucking kidding me ohgk;mkgea;lgr342,,

i can't even

of course not don't be silly, I just took that off some tumblr I frequent

i can only recommend it

wHAT

WHAT HTE FUCK

did you make this?//// is this your blog

mouette

are

you

for

real

i

w

h

y

take the time

to

because I'm worth it

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