What story is that?

I don't have it's name, but it's suppose to be a short story that was for a contest. I has horrible mistakes and the plot is so...I don't even know.

Wow that sounds terrible.

It's worse than any fanfiction I've ever read.

Haha was the grammar all wrong and story all over the place?

It has a pretty concise story. It just doesn't know what to do with it.

Awww too bad... It sounds like a waste...