Change to font you can read, use better poses, one simple arms down pose would have been better, all that blank space, and then your photos were taken on a different colour so its in your hair, and then a huge hud but tiny buttons ? for something so simple its so busy, i had to read the font to know what it was you were selling

Sasypants: thank you, going to work on it <3

you are welcome, also if you had swapped the girls around, it might have been better, looking off camera like that, unless an arty pic, makes me wonder whats over there, instead of spending money

Just keep in mind, that the focal point is what you are selling. make sure that you use complimentary poses and lighting that shows the item off best. Avoid making it look "too" good, so that when people purchase it, the ads look nothing like what they bought. Mess around with your lighting presets, as well as setup some basic lights, and don't be afraid

to play around with them. Sometimes the best settings come when you are just messing around with them

also, keep calm. take your time. and keep at it!

OrianaKuhr: Thanxx

np