you're rly good at conveying emotion into what you write and you nail character voices
Like I cannot express how On Point Snowe and Snek seem to be. Admittedly I know little of MGS but I can hear his voice saying the things so like
the snek point makes me feel really good because i make a point of considering "can i read this in the david hayter snakevoice" for all the dialogue i write
I DO THE SAME FOR SOME OF MINE I KNOW THIS FEEL OF JOY
it helps that its hard to be TOO silly with snake. sometimes i worry im being too silly with him. and then i remember some of the shit he says in does in canon.
solid snake: [james bond pose] its like a spy movie!!
solid snake, in a locker: [at otacon] this reminds me of when we first met
otacon: yeah but i was in the locker last time. looks like its the other way around, huh?
snake: not unless i wet my pants
otacon: thats a low blow snake
snake: my names... david
otacon: im hal, dave
snake: ... hal and dave, huh? ha! thats a good one. maybe we should take a trip to jupiter
proof that solid snake is a movie nerd
(2001 a space odyssey reference, dave and HAL 9000)