這個劇情，讓我來說就是讓人興奮的要飛起來ㄌ

Shikamaru sighs again, walking towards Naruto to lean over him, waiting a moment for any sign of movement before gently slapping his cheek, frowning.
…
A grin stretches across Naruto’s face, the only warning before Shikamaru has his arms full of the blonde, and an exclamation of, “Shika!” Ringing in his ears.

“Naruto,” Shikamaru waits for him to pull away before continuing, “we’re not alone.”

看到鹿丸就撲上去抱抱的鳴人&沒有阻止對方反而默默抱抱的鹿丸導致其他下忍震驚無比，啊啊比起p站果然ao3的作品普遍更好看啊………

Shikamaru shrugs, gathering the scrolls and handing them to Naruto.

Ino raises an eyebrow at that, confused, "why are you giving the scrolls to him? He's the least responsible of the group," she questions.

"Troublesome," Shikamaru grumbles, looking at Naruto who shrugs sheepishly.

為什麼把卷軸給鳴人？因為他是現場最強，而且鹿丸跟他彼此信任，這點廢話你們這群下忍菜雞就不要繼續糾結ㄌ

Shikamaru coming with Naruto was an unspoken decision. They knew Naruto could use all the help he could get to change the future, and Shikamaru was the best option as the head strategist. Not to mention how close the two had gotten over the years and how well they work together.

火影與輔佐官難道不是永恆的嗑題嗎

不過一週目的最後倖存者竟然是鳴人、鹿丸、小櫻、佐助、（復活的）自來也，
第七班生命力真的太頑強了其他人都死透了剩下你們整個小隊完整……

佐助：這次不要讓我離村了好ㄇ，事後知道我哥大屠殺的背後真相讓人很生氣ㄋ

“Do you remember Naruto and Shikamaru being close before?” Sakura questions him.
…
“Maybe we should -” Naruto starts, voice low.

Shikamaru snags his hand in an almost too-tight grip, “no. Whatever else we do, we stick together.”

不太明白劇情的展開，鳴人感受到鹿丸回憶一週目的痛苦，因此發出了狗狗嗚咽的聲音（？）作者是明確寫到whine這個詞以及牙馬上反應「？怎麼有狗在叫」嗎？
鳴人果然是鹿丸的忠犬

兩個人默默地抱在一起哀悼，一起失控，豈不是太好了嗎

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It’s when Shikamaru hears his dad mumble to himself, “maybe he’s just nervous about bringing a crush home?” That he decides it’s time for Naruto to leave. With his face entirely too red for him to pretend he hadn’t heard Shikaku,

這是奈良鹿久驚人智慧在第一次見到（實際上穿越過來的）兒子與鳴人時得到的正確答案

什麼？？？？？？作者現在告訴我他們沒有在約會也不是一對以及「沒有喜歡對方」嗎？？？你們還沒戳破窗紙？？

鹿丸在腦內一直是稱呼鳴人為「我的火影」
鳴人：不要再叫我火影了！萬一被發現！
但鹿丸還是依然故我，果然他只承認鳴人是自己願意效忠的火影

鹿久：那麼，關於漩渦鳴人………
鹿丸：啊？！你是什麼意思？（瞪（反射性保護
鹿久：我想他應該搬進我們家的房間。
鹿丸：……………
鹿丸：……
鹿丸：？

"I'm sorry, what?" Naruto sputters completely caught off guard by the words Shika had just uttered.

Shikaku stood beside the boy, both in Naruto's doorway.

"I said grab your belongings, you're moving in with us," Shikamaru repeated, stuffing his hands into his pants pockets.

"Um. I don't think that's -" Naruto started, getting cut off by Shikaku.

犬塚牙的部分，認為「現在」鳴人的氣味是森林、火焰和悲傷，鹿丸則是香煙、悲傷與雨後氣味，
想想豈不是穿越前的場景？

Shikaku was having an incredibly difficult time keeping his face blank during the whole ordeal. He's watching his son and Naruto, and wonders why Shikamaru, as smart as he is, hasn't realized what's so obvious to an outsider. He glances over at Jiraiya, the man looking at the two teens with befuddlement clear in his expression.

鹿久：？為何鹿丸這麼聰明卻沒發現自己跟鳴人根本是戀愛？？

"Troublesome. Fine," Shikamaru huffs, wanting to just get out of there already. It's been an entirely too long day, and he is ready to curl up to sleep along with the blonde.

仿佛能夠聽見鹿久振臂高呼：奈良鹿丸！！你這個愚蠢的兒子，為什麼你們之間這麼明顯的事情你偏偏沒有發現！！你的智商都白長了！！