到尾聲先開的看文感想
be like我知道grindeldor其中一個最重要的關鍵字是分道揚鑣
但當我看到分道揚鑣劇情時還是會eMotiOnaL DAmAgE
但當我看到分道揚鑣劇情時還是會eMotiOnaL DAmAgE
目測剩低around十個chapter
有冇機會和好
有冇機會和好
wadiu my heart
my heart
ok my bad
at least 20 chapters
at least 20 chapters
wadiu峰迴路轉
百幾個是咪嗰百幾週目嘅記憶 
屌道理我明
但佢會咁順攤咩 
佢為佢付出過好多所以佢後悔？
or因為佢缺愛？？？
like albus is his only one
bbq end
- 開新篇 
回覆數no.1
回覆數no.1
Once again 第一身角度的描述是會受角色的知識量影響
like他一個純種巫師形容臭味用蛋白質糖分脂肪真的會很出戲
like他一個純種巫師形容臭味用蛋白質糖分脂肪真的會很出戲
「邓布利多在自己的学生面前永远是最睿智的那一个，他温和地问道：“你没有把自己的名字投进去，对吗？」
Dumbledore asked calmly 
um...暫時覺得尼莫好睇啲
角色感情嗰part
角色感情嗰part
屌但係唔make sense喎
gg第四部時間住入no.12
有冇機會喺第五部前搵到locket
有冇機會喺第五部前搵到locket
「安排在了自己弟弟的房间里住宿」
ouch
ouch
我以為canon時間線reg間房喺第七部前冇人入過
ok bref
見到尖叫屋以為又有老是常出現cp
點知原來係哥想潛入學校
哥痴q咗線唔對路係因為戴住locket
因為佢喺reg房搵到Kreacher搏命保護嘅locket
佢以為locket係reg遺物
點知原來係哥想潛入學校
哥痴q咗線唔對路係因為戴住locket
因為佢喺reg房搵到Kreacher搏命保護嘅locket
佢以為locket係reg遺物
thx
我唔信狗係純因為被locket誘惑先戴上頸
我唔信
我唔信
canon線locket被狗揼過n次又被Kreacher執返去n次
狗冇可能冇接觸過locket
而佢一次都冇戴過上頸
狗冇可能冇接觸過locket
而佢一次都冇戴過上頸
可能超譯但係我信我啱
gay gay homosexuel gay
仆街話口未完
老是常
當我見到傲嬌貴族小受draco嗰一刻就應該知道
me rolling my eyes to see my brain
我得罪咗咩人
what the hell even is a 隱影車
係隱影車就由佢隱影落去啦好嗎
佢唔想畀人知
係隱影車就由佢隱影落去啦好嗎
佢唔想畀人知
尊重呢
於是我成個chapter skip咗
對於救世主因為小小嘢就沉咗對立咗四年嘅死對頭船我又係搞不掂
BAMF Grindelwald
搞唔係好掂
「她声称马尔福家的出众外貌似乎也并非一无事处。」
明明你屋企先係出眾外貌
同你表弟照下鏡先啦
明明你屋企先係出眾外貌
同你表弟照下鏡先啦
btw咁大件事狗好似失咗蹤咁
diudiudiu咁佢哋係咪以為reg收埋個locket係因為voldie交畀佢保管
食咗佢credit都算
仆街我勁嬲
我冇乜感覺 
副cp結局放番外 笑死
謝不殺之恩
- new fic
translate
translate
- or try sum got au?
lmao見到馬份家族做最大奸角已經想skip
馬份家族suppose係趨炎附勢而唔係革命家
你話其他我唔識嘅爺世代or even再早啲嘅malfoy都算
推翻政權嘅竟然係lucius
推翻政權嘅竟然係lucius
就算你要屈到係gaunt嘅私生子佛地魔先係背後嘅人都好違和 
狗哥已經係「最小兒子」
ok skimm完就算
setting都唔貼叫人點睇
一係直接上文昆鳩人睇落去attach咗先
我知我勁難服侍
anyway
講多句
介紹weasleys嗰陣做乜要加埋「有極大潛力」落去
我以為weasley嘅魅力係underdog 劉備讀者自己感受svp
介紹weasleys嗰陣做乜要加埋「有極大潛力」落去
我以為weasley嘅魅力係underdog
劉備讀者自己感受svp
yes I said 劉備
- 小動物骨 現代無魔法背景
有冇講過啲簡中manipulative theseus有時有啲假
- 中年教授意外懷孕
好狗血 八點檔
八點檔
幾廿歲人
「如果黑巫师有产地的话，罗马利亚能算主要产地」
勁撚racist
勁撚racist
- slytherins被prank (ofc是marauders手筆
trigger reg ptsd
trigger reg ptsd
屌你又有老是常
喺delusional呢方面在下絕對甘拜下風
屌呢個人哋對佢釋出善意佢就重複人哋句子最後兩個字加問號勁pure勁true嘅reg真係睇撚到炆
“I'm here to help you. You're going to be fine.”
“Help me ?”
“Help me ?”
呃……
roll my eyes to see my brain
like how old are you
how old are you writer?????
佢叫佢petit lion
why am i falling for that every time
- 繼續電影圈au
Weasley twins做主持好fun
jacob! 
原來一早一齊咗
影帝們的cp粉就算了吧 
we have no stake in society ga
we have no stake in society ga
幾fun
- 重寫hp1-7? but with grindeldore?
是我喜歡的文筆 
skim少少睇下正篇係咪都係呢種文筆
they mentioned reg 
at the end of prologue
仆街panic
which means the writer is doing the similar thing
to what I was going to do
which means the writer is doing the similar thing
to what I was going to do
like rewrite canon
with adding one favourite character
- 打尖睇Kreacher立大功
"His brother is a traitor only to the House of Black."
yesssssssss
yesssssssss
老是常一出現差啲喺老母面前屌出聲
oh please 好假
好假
又見到啲abusive traumatised嘅tag
講開又講
比較吃的黑家關係是reg being the ignored child
- 推文list必有文 戰敗if
佢哋如果生嘅係女
如果個女叫ariana就勁cliché
如果個女叫ariana就勁cliché
wadiu theseus死咗
戰死ver戰爭英雄
作者平日睇唔少fan theory
grindelwald basically was saying Dumbledore 任你哋舞係因為佢林善 the real world doesn't work that way
「将信绑在朱利叶斯的腿上时，远处传来一声熟悉的啼鸣，邓布利多抬起头，正朝他飞来的阿芙拉瞪圆了眼，显然对他让其它猫头鹰送信这件事心怀不满。阿芙拉警惕地冲朱利叶斯竖起了脖子上的毛，后者没有理会它，径自带着信件飞离了邓布利多的手臂。」
呷醋貓頭鷹 
好酸
佢哋長期處於好酸狀態 
又嚟
又係落雨 夏天 aberforth albus gellert組合
what lun the faq
情情塌塌
咁就完！
見到原子彈發現唔夠抽其實make sense
like 科學側係永無止境咁進步
尤其近一百年
好似攞咗外星人科技咁
「菲尼亚斯·布莱克的画像静静看着办公室中这对父子，又看了看周围空掉的画框。或许，他也该回格里莫广场去了。」
返去睇walburga打仔？
我笑呢啲係咪會落地獄
雖然我唔覺得walburga會真係打
or唔係日日打
or唔係日日打
詹斯波特！
哥！
ahhh wait...
don't you dare make Alfred(?) a marauders too...
對唔字
我堅持狗先係顏值天花板
我堅持狗先係顏值天花板
要睇到鹿輾壓reg
at the quidditch field
at the quidditch field
得罪講句 所有ariana都係夢女
好狗血但係睇得好爽
like I won't recommend it but it won't stop me from enjoying it
我就大眾口味
其實篇戰敗au basically係porn with plot
reg was mentioned tho
用嚟側面描寫鹿quidditch有幾勁同意氣風發
掛住reg
I know what's wrong
the thing is, the way gellert goes super horny everytime he sees albus, makes me doubt if he has implanted his dick into his brain
or the other way around
- 陽痿筆記
”我怎么能同时使我自己是少数人、而我的家人和朋友是多数人？”
作为一名混血巫师，她是生长在麻瓜中的一棵树，现在有人说应该把她连根拔起、移植到巫师的伊甸园。
作为一名混血巫师，她是生长在麻瓜中的一棵树，现在有人说应该把她连根拔起、移植到巫师的伊甸园。
個比喻好好
成段我都想quote
“麻瓜们有一句智慧的话是这样说的——如果我没有记错：在那些厌恶压迫的人们中，却有许多人喜欢压迫别人。”
邓布利多教授专注地看着虚空中的一个点，他的蓝眼睛愈发明亮。
“当一个人告诉我们：有一类人比另一类人更值得、更平等、更自由，而我们也同意他的观点，那说明了什么呢？”他启发着他的学生。
“说明我们让一个人的意志凌驾于我们所有人之上。”S小姐轻轻回答。
“是的。要警惕这一点，在此种评价体系之下，每个人在某一天都会变得没那么有用、没那么杰出、没那么重要，没那么——值得活下去——”
邓布利多教授专注地看着虚空中的一个点，他的蓝眼睛愈发明亮。
“当一个人告诉我们：有一类人比另一类人更值得、更平等、更自由，而我们也同意他的观点，那说明了什么呢？”他启发着他的学生。
“说明我们让一个人的意志凌驾于我们所有人之上。”S小姐轻轻回答。
“是的。要警惕这一点，在此种评价体系之下，每个人在某一天都会变得没那么有用、没那么杰出、没那么重要，没那么——值得活下去——”
how do I make some ppl see this
其實咩人都啱睇
@香港人
碌鳩識轉彎！
呢個作者文風係咪either ooc式搞笑or不知所云式傷春悲秋
冇中間
唔睇
篇嘢對我嚟講已經完咗
篇嘢對我嚟講已經完咗
呢個作者啱口味
- 戰敗au 40年後 one shot
the writer really showed me instead of telling how gellert feels
for albus
for albus
同埋唔係戀愛腦
oh原來係戰敗30年後
反而係樓下啲comment
「虽然你把我献祭给了你的伟大事业，但是我走后依旧守护着你。」
佢睇唔得得明上一篇
more like 縱使我和你的理念對立，但我離去了也依舊守護著你？
重點應該唔係校長死唔死而係佢哋理念南轅北轍
不平等社會+用恐懼治理世界對校長嚟講慘過死
不平等社會+用恐懼治理世界對校長嚟講慘過死
like如果校長只係自己受傷害佢都可以自己決定原唔原諒gg
但當成個世界都被恐懼壓迫同不平等支配著
全個世界不論麻瓜巫師都受影響嘅時候
who is he to represent everyone to forgive him
但當成個世界都被恐懼壓迫同不平等支配著
全個世界不論麻瓜巫師都受影響嘅時候
who is he to represent everyone to forgive him
like no matter how many life gellert has taken, albus still loves him
he shouldn't but he still is
想知道校長會不會為這份感情感到愧疚
I mean to the rest of the world
- gellert pov; that summer; chaotic gerllert
translation
translation
owl-sex
好in c
描寫到gg一開始對ad另有所圖
感情也不是純粹的
但之後漸漸交付了真心
好愛
描寫到gg一開始對ad另有所圖
感情也不是純粹的
但之後漸漸交付了真心
好愛
dry humping is forever super hot
「貓頭鷹信愛」
that's brilliant
that's brilliant
patriarchy but gellert grindelwald
grindriarchy
this should be a word
he thought albus is his reward
a gift from universe or destiny
- 一個冇人留言但seems nice非典型戰敗
「如同脐带与紫河车」
點解唔用胎盤
紫河車好藥材
點解唔用胎盤
紫河車好藥材
呢篇啲比喻＆形容好特別
booknaeked
- 睇下兄弟
小動物兄弟
又蛋白質臭味 
- Pacific rim au
Dumbledore揶揄
佢會揶揄嘅咩
全員oc
but I'll stay for the original plot
- 嘗試開黑道au grindeldore
「就像孩童把珍宝埋在荒野里，又丢了块自以为特形的石头做标记，结果回头去找时才发现漫山遍野全是石头。」
好狗血 the writer ain't lying
the writer ain't lying
「阿鼻地獄」
思想亞洲化嘅英國人
思想亞洲化嘅英國人
？？？？？
呢個似戰敗au作者多過hunger games au作者喎
呢個似戰敗au作者多過hunger games au作者喎
但係佢又真係尼莫作者喎？？？？？？
屌我明咩事
睇ggad係想睇佢哋價值觀唔同再睇佢哋點殊途同歸？or遷就妥協放下？？？？？
or focus on common ground???
anyways
on value basis
focus喺邊個欠邊個多啲就好……
- 放置咗好耐嘅thorki重生
as always
中英夾雜
speed run
又有老是常
睇得出作者其實唔知發生咩事
rabbit係asgardian叫rocket嘅稱呼
唔止係thor 其他唔識rocket嘅asgardian見到佢都有當過佢係兔仔
可以理解為asgard啲兔仔可能同地球浣熊出奇地似樣
笨唔代表所有宇宙人為咗調侃rocket都會叫佢做兔仔
唔止係thor 其他唔識rocket嘅asgardian見到佢都有當過佢係兔仔
可以理解為asgard啲兔仔可能同地球浣熊出奇地似樣
笨唔代表所有宇宙人為咗調侃rocket都會叫佢做兔仔
pirate angel又係
gotg小隊叫thor做pirate angel係因為thor喺雷3同hela打完冇咗隻眼之後戴著眼罩
angel係因為佢金髮藍眼勁靚仔成個天使咁
並唔代表gotg小隊見到雷2時間線完好無缺thor都會叫佢做pirate angel
gotg小隊叫thor做pirate angel係因為thor喺雷3同hela打完冇咗隻眼之後戴著眼罩
angel係因為佢金髮藍眼勁靚仔成個天使咁
並唔代表gotg小隊見到雷2時間線完好無缺thor都會叫佢做pirate angel
好啦
野性呢part算過
野性呢part算過
咁北歐人又真係海盜嚟
好多妄自菲薄嘅廢話
?????????
who that
- pride and prejudice au
wow this one
only 6 chapters but it feels like we've been thru a lot?
同canon融合得好好I'm impressed
and it's abo too 但我沒有反感欸
shit can ariana live this time
pride & préjudice au 應該安全？
但係屌原作好似都有人死
仆街 作者really said end of 山谷篇
I'm scared
仆街 齊腳然後aberforth同gerllet開始嘈交
做啞炮好太多了
我宣佈係happy end 
算點
分手炮
分手炮
好好睇
大多數ggad文都係寫gg幾渣同佢有幾愛ad
呢篇完全睇得出佢哋互相有幾愛對方
大多數ggad文都係寫gg幾渣同佢有幾愛ad
呢篇完全睇得出佢哋互相有幾愛對方
feel到要佢哋分開對佢哋雙方都係折磨
嗰種互相都係對方嘅第一同唯一表現得淋漓盡致
really is soul mate at it's finest
嗰種互相都係對方嘅第一同唯一表現得淋漓盡致
really is soul mate at it's finest
and Aberforth & ariana's pov
好好睇
啲角色都立體咗
啲角色都立體咗
佢哋可以喺互通心意後繼續幻得幻失好好睇
「纯洁又污秽、洁白又肮脏的，他有着无数的念头和欲望想要倾泻而下，把这个家伙肏弄到哭泣，折磨到疯狂，他会这么做，像对待自己所有物般粗暴，夹杂着温柔和糖果，他要阿不思迷恋自己，犹如自己现在这般喜爱他一样。」
「博弈的骑兵带着长枪奔跑而过，它击落皇后，攻占国王，当城池陷落，四季的变化也将不再分明。」
be like 攻城掠地 but a better version, a them version
be like 攻城掠地 but a better version, a them version
off topic but this theseus is so very in c
and the dynamic btw him and newt
I can totally see how they grown into fb2 dynamic
like gg和ad和ad家庭和巫師麻瓜之間的是死結
that newt & theseus' dynamique
屌見到校長咁multitasking我好慚愧
like he has to work, teaching students, taking care of his teenage son, spending time with family, perhaps friends, working on some academic thesis research, also he made free time to have sex with his politician leader bf
oh god
好愛
the scamander bros
ship
- 古靈閣加息借唔到錢買樓newt
「不过大部分时候，他在发表这样的批评时，会偷偷在心里划分一个小圈，把忒修斯扔进去——像告诉泰迪别乱跑那样，在心里对忒修斯说，待在这里，别乱跑，我知道你虽然站在那个圈子里，但你和那些讨厌的家伙不一样。」
feel related
睇咗兩篇好好睇嘅thesewt 
what did I miss
加息嗰篇中間勁好睇
like at the end they're pre slash
like at the end they're pre slash
但係啱啱好
遺願清單 - theseus變小梗
ho jeng
my heart
my feeling
btw 十四行詩乜乜C大調乜乜乜嚟形容一見鍾情係某種中國référence定某種cultural reference
若干年前喺dc fandom文見過
屌原來係願望清單 自膠
自膠
遺願清單係drarry文
- BxA 兄弟
點解咁唔連貫？？？好kick
個分別喺邊？？？？？？
like newt要去azkaban查案
發現用唔到patronus跟著去搵校長？
發現用唔到patronus跟著去搵校長？
個priority?
like leta可以隻揪grindelwald就唔會怕azkaban啲dementors同囚犯
覺得少咗啲嘢就直接懷疑記憶有問題？
直奔答案？？？？
直奔答案？？？？
did you have the scripts on hand newt
如果唔係piority問題咁點解睇落咁kick
年上一寫得唔好真係好易似grooming
I thought I can make it
太撚油
like who are those
太撚痴纏
- leta死後newt在照顧theseus
熟口熟面
真係睇過 
旅行嗰part
旅行嗰part
who is this newt but ill stay
其實係幾好睇
啲感情好似好成熟
- 同作者現代au one shot
this setting?????
like who are they
basically ocs
呢個作者嘅au真係當oc睇就得
啲settings係咩事
點都會變oc
like the only element remains is incest and theseus love newt with his life
啲settings係咩事
點都會變oc
like the only element remains is incest and theseus love newt with his life
屌有其他ship唔down聲
like who the hell even are they
佢哋寫得好難睇I'm amazed
又唔記得mark
係我cp
reg pregante
係我cp
reg pregante
at some point I'm pissed
咩撚嘢事
- 失戀後重聚的兄弟
感情細膩
難聽講係矯情
難聽講係矯情
好似睇過
點解後面冇印象
？？？？？
冇神奇小動物ver.
- St. mungo第七層
兄弟記事三篇
兄弟記事三篇
好好睇
敍事方法都好有趣
係願望清單作者！