critiques?

is she swinging or standing? to me teh balance of the pose suggests swinging but the angle she's at is so close to standing

if you rotated her maybe 40 degrees ish ccwshe would be more suspended from the rope

and the rest of her pose would feel more relaxed

ah thats actually solved with the background, her left foot is on the edge of the rail of the ship. so shes just leaning off the ship

the rope for supporty

-y

lol

ahh, i could see that, yeah

that's a cool idea, can you post it with the rough bg?

sure hold on

blah

rooough work lol

i think it might look a little less stiff if the angle on the face wasn't right on

it feels like it's robbing the movement

a little too much symmetry in an otherwise very active pose

I completely agree. Im jsut scared to change the angle and mess up the hair lol

I do agree it seems unnatural though, shes breaking the THIRD WALL!

lol

never look at the camera!

ohwell

4th?

lol thank you kimmy, I suppose I dont have an excuse because its digital. and yes 4th wall XD

lol

EPIC INDEED I love her hair but i have no real crits at the moment im just soaking in pretty arts selfishly today

lol artsponge

*soak*