ElTorpid0 shares
16 years ago
latest #32
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
critiques?
ChrisKa says
16 years ago
is she swinging or standing? to me teh balance of the pose suggests swinging but the angle she's at is so close to standing
ChrisKa says
16 years ago
if you rotated her maybe 40 degrees ish ccwshe would be more suspended from the rope
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ChrisKa says
16 years ago
and the rest of her pose would feel more relaxed
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
ah thats actually solved with the background, her left foot is on the edge of the rail of the ship. so shes just leaning off the ship
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
the rope for supporty
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
-y
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
lol
ChrisKa says
16 years ago
ahh, i could see that, yeah
ChrisKa says
16 years ago
that's a cool idea, can you post it with the rough bg?
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
sure hold on
ElTorpid0 shares
16 years ago
ElTorpid0 shares
16 years ago
rooough work lol
ChrisKa says
16 years ago
i think it might look a little less stiff if the angle on the face wasn't right on
ChrisKa says
16 years ago
it feels like it's robbing the movement
ChrisKa says
16 years ago
a little too much symmetry in an otherwise very active pose
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
I completely agree. Im jsut scared to change the angle and mess up the hair lol
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
I do agree it seems unnatural though, shes breaking the THIRD WALL!
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
lol
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
never look at the camera!
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
ohwell
ChrisKa says
16 years ago
4th?
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
lol thank you kimmy, I suppose I dont have an excuse because its digital. and yes 4th wall XD
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
lol
kina says
16 years ago
EPIC INDEED I love her hair but i have no real crits at the moment im just soaking in pretty arts selfishly today :-P
ElTorpid0 says
16 years ago
lol artsponge
kina says
16 years ago
*soak*
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