PLEASE CRIT THE ALTERATIONS! (heart)

special note: shes not swinging one foot is planted on the edge of a boat, rope is for support. as if shes just landing FROM swinging)

upon further inspection I myself think her torso is to long...thoughts?

I really like the changes to the angle of the face, looks awesome! Much better like that. I would agree that the torso is too long, tho!

lol more hours of revision *cries*

lol I know I did. okay how about easy fixes that dont involve re-angling (AKA redrawing) everything? I know the torsoe is a cut and pastejob

I want to start colouring it already lol

the face should be easy too, because its just pieces on a white background

it's a lot easier to change stuff if you ask for crits before inking!

hahah too true. but my sketches are hardly anything like my inked. most of the errors dont become that apparent until black goes down

i usually do a clean pencils version in between sketch and ink so i can make sure i'm preserving as much of the action as i can

this was all digital though, with traditional Im much the same