so... I altered the arm, shortened the torso considerably, and changed the mouth and expression...... anything else?

does it pass the crit test now? lol

the mouth is hard to discern in the plurk shrunk pic, if curious the full size is on devart ^^

lol Ill take the silence as everything being fine then? oootay!

i'll have to see the mouth coloured, but the torso looks MUCH better