nice piece. i just read it

nice?!

thanks guys

tatlo un

apat pala

pain.. the reason.. light.. rare.. yang apata na yan

the Light is kinda morbid but it ended in a nice way so it aint a tragic. it rather poses neutarility of feelings.

ryth: naks hahaha wala ka paring kupas

the poem Rare is a piece about how people could really be unique and rare in an unfortunate way. tsk, it's a fact.

ryth: what is morbid

Rare would give someone a moral to be real...to be genuine...for real.

isa palang yung nabasa ko. but it has sumting

dead_oxygen: wait lang. nagcocomment ako. commentator ako.

hahah ok

itZ nyZx ...

"the reason" is a very sweet endearing poem...i bet this girl has caught your heart so deeply bad.

ryth: siya rin ung tinutuoy sa light

"pain" doesnt have any rhymes. ya gotta work on your rhymes! hehehehe.

ryth: medyo more on story kasi ung pain eh

ung girl na tinutukoy sa the reason.. siya rin ung girl sa light

poems could be stories. but stories could never be poems. this is the reason why i have a distinct passion on reading poems.

poems though in my opinion are more artistic in nature because of rhymes and symbolism.

yun lamang

hehe

so it really takes a lot of effort to make a good poem.

..unless you're a shakespearean. hahahaha!

hahaha hapit lang yung tatlo eh

ngaun ko lang ginawa

ung pain light at rare

okay.

kelan ka pa naging makata?

haha tagal na

nakz. poet k pla